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A dragon.

I beg for critic on the lineart this time, guys. Oh, and that thingie over there is a signature I use when I don't want to fill too much space with the other one :B

See you later!

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:iconcomrade-max:
very cool man love the body shape dude, the line work seems solid on it man, great character :)

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:icongermanshible:
muy genial Luis!

In regards to the line art, you need to vary your lines more to emphasize weight and form. The idea is to create the illusion of a 3D object in space. This is especially true of the lines within the dragon shape, they are flattened because the line width is dead.

John K has posted a lot of information about inking that you may want to consider: [link] < Here is a good starter and here is more indepth info < [link]

hope that helps and if you have any questions I would be happy to help you.

Keep up the good fight!
German

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:iconsdex:
me late, igual lo mismo que el de arriba, un poco de gruesos y delgados en la linea lo haria resaltar aun mas, porcierto me gusta mas esa firma, saludOs*

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:iconamandamyers:
I think this is really cute. I really like the curves in his neck.

I suppose if you wanted to adjust some things, I'd suggest taking out the part of his tail that is poking out from underneath him. It's not confusing, but may be a little distracting to some people.

There are also some areas that contain trapped space. The largest ones is created by the head and tail almost meeting.
:iconyolicat:
amazing lines on Ink or whatever you're using!

I like dragon look cute!

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:iconimakoi:
Lo ame, es perfecto!

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:iconimakoi:
me das permiso de colorearlo?

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:iconmaizekid74:
man o man that is a good one

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:iconluismario:
Por supollo! Seria un honor

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