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another Seth sketch

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This is a panel I'm gonna use for the comic I'm working on, with Seth, that's for sure.
Hope you like it, people.

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Nice flow to it, but I can't help but feel that the text isn't matching the image. Not in that you need a new font, but what he's saying isn't registering on his face. He's got more of a "Hey baby...this is my gun" look than "Hey punk, I'm frikken threatening you with a firearm" look.

What I'm saying is don't be afraid to use your crazy expressions. A line like this would be perfect with a calm and cool/ i really want to shoot you right now look. I know you're fully capable of those distorted faces, so put them to good use. Especially if it's for a comic.